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 Hello Debian,
 
 as announced in December, we will host a MiniDebConf at Linuxwochen Wien at the
 end of April.
 
-The event will aim for a focus on the use of Debian on embedded servers in home or
+The event will aim to focus on the use of Debian on embedded servers in home or
 small office applications, but is open to all Debian topics as well.
 
 * Date: April 28th and 29th (MiniDebCamp), 30th and May 1st (MiniDebConf)
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 Best regards, and see you in April
 chrysn and the debienna team
 
-[1] http://osm.org/go/0JrJZzakX
-[2] http://debienna.at/minidebconf_vie2016/
-[2] https://wiki.debian.org/DebianEvents/de/2016/MiniDCVienna
-[3] https://cfp.linuxwochen.at/en/MiniDC16/cfp/session/new
+[1]: http://osm.org/go/0JrJZzakX
+[2]: http://debienna.at/minidebconf_vie2016/
+[3]: https://wiki.debian.org/DebianEvents/de/2016/MiniDCVienna
+[4]: https://cfp.linuxwochen.at/en/MiniDC16/cfp/session/new