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 Hello Debian,
 
 as announced in December, we will host a MiniDebConf at Linuxwochen Wien at the
 end of April.
 
-The event will aim for a focus on the use of Debian on embedded servers in home or
+The event will aim to focus on the use of Debian on embedded servers in home or
 small office applications, but is open to all Debian topics as well.
 
 * Date: April 28th and 29th (MiniDebCamp), 30th and May 1st (MiniDebConf)
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 (eg. presentations that don't fit the standard format, workshops that need
 wired network), please let us know in your submission.
 
-Please register your submissions at [4] until March 15th.
+Please register your submissions at [4] until March 28th.
 
 Best regards, and see you in April
 chrysn and the debienna team