refined draft for official announcement

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 speziell offen:
 
-* worueber machen wir teilnehmeranmeldungen?
-
 * fokusthema schaerfen!
 
-* "@@@" rauswerfen
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-@@@Greetings,
+Hello Debian,
 
-@@@This is official announcement:
+as announced in December, we will host a MiniDebConf at Linuxwochen Wien at the
+end of April.
 
-The event will have a focus on the use of Debian on embedded servers in home or
-small office applications, but is open to Debian topics unrelated to that as well.
+The event will aim for a focus on the use of Debian on embedded servers in home or
+small office applications, but is open to all Debian topics as well.
 
 * Date: April 28th and 29th (MiniDebCamp), 30th and May 1st (MiniDebConf)
-* Location: Vienna, Höchstädtplatz 6 (FH Technikum), see @@@
+* Location: Vienna, Höchstädtplatz 6 (FH Technikum, [1])
+
+Information on accomodation and transportation is available on [2].
 
-Please register as a participant at @@@ so we can allocate an appropriate auditorium.
+Please register as a participant at [3] so we can allocate an appropriate
+auditorium.
 
 Event submission
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@@ -31,9 +31,12 @@ be 45 minutes including Q+A; if you have additional requirements for your event
 (eg. presentations that don't fit the standard format, workshops that need
 wired network), please let us know in your submission.
 
-Please register your submissions at @@@ until March 1st. Lightning talks are
-managed at @@@.
+Please register your submissions at [4] until March 15th.
 
-@@@linuxwochen-link?
+Best regards, and see you in April
+chrysn and the debienna team
 
-@@@Greetings
+[1] http://osm.org/go/0JrJZzakX
+[2] http://debienna.at/minidebconf_vie2016/
+[2] https://wiki.debian.org/DebianEvents/de/2016/MiniDCVienna
+[3] https://cfp.linuxwochen.at/en/MiniDC16/cfp/session/new